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Old 12-01-2006, 02:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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After all the help I have received, I hope this is better. Please comment.


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You tell me; does this inspire you? What does her expression tell you? What is she feeling? What is she doing there? Why is she there, and why is she in a bikini?

These are all questions I ask myself when looking at this image. To me, she is just "there."

Thank god she's not against a tree though, so I give you that! LOL

You're improving. Keep it up!
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Let me add some food for thought.

If I am typically going to shoot a bikini image, I want a bikini "setting."

I wouldn't shoot a bikini in a bedroom, nor would I shoot lingerie by the pool (ok..maybe in the pool...LOL)

Try to match the wardrobe with the setting.

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Very noticeable improvement. Dave has some good points. I'd like to add that the lightng is getting better and having the model look into the camera adds a big diff to previous posts. Can't wait to see your next post.
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Comments taken, will do so..............thanks!
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