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Bailie for C&C please
Old 12-01-2006, 03:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Please let me know what I am getting right and wrong please.
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Re: Bailie for C&C please
Old 12-01-2006, 05:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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#1 has a blue cast (WB?) and the leaves in the foreground are distracting. Loose cropping.

#2 the background looks "racy" and she doesn't standout.

#3 could be cropped tighter.

#4 I love her legs, but she looks distressed

#5 too much headroom IMO and there's just something about the leaves that draws my eyes to them. Like the smile though.

#6 looks like she's rising up from the bottom of the frame. Would make a nice headshot if it were cropped tighter.

I hate to keep saying this, but at least this young lady allowed you to take a few shoots. I haven't gotten half as close, but Iím still trying.

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Re: Bailie for C&C please
Old 12-01-2006, 10:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I'd say I pretty much agree with what CW said about most of the photos, but Ill try to throw in an original thought or two. Here's my 2 cents, but remember i've been doing this for less than 2 years, so my opinion is worth less than some others.

#1. Were you going for the blue green look? IF so fine, if not maybe try turning dow the blue or green in PS?

#2. Something... The pose, or maybe the dress, or perhaps both, just aren't flattering to the model. Also, it's a little on the dark side.

#3. Looks like a fun shot and the general idea is there, but her left arm looks awkward.

#4. Is the best of the bunch, but would be better with a tighter crop, and her expression just doesn't add to the photo,

#5. Love her expression in this one, very flirty and fun.

#6. Not crazy about htis one, her skin looks pale and the pose and crop just dont work.

Keep shooting, keep posting, and always strive to improve.

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Re: Bailie for C&C please
Old 12-01-2006, 10:54 AM   #4 (permalink)
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There's a couple of basic things that are amiss here in all of the photos.

Your WB is having issues. Take it off the auto WB and set it to one of the presets. Also, you'e not exposing for what's most imprtant, her face. #2 is a prefact example of that. Her head is in complete shadow. If she has teeth, I'm sure they're nice, but I can't see them in #2.

Get your WB on track and expose the photo for what's important and you'll see a drastic improvement.

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