Two brief little items. First its a nice clean portrait. But the hair light seems to be spilling too much into the main area as it gives a distinct shadow to the large ear ring which calls attention to the lighting. I would normally try to feather the light so that it did not cast that shadow. My other question is about cropping. Would it work better if you cropped below the breast rather than through the breast (I don't know how it was framed, so you might not have had any leeway there.) The eyes are nice and crisp which is always a great plus and the subject is very engaging. Good work.
Haley in Pastel.