Originally Posted by FotoTejas
I've just completed a major renovation on my website.... I think it may be ready for a beta test. So -- I'd appreciate your review, comments and suggestions.
A few things that I noticed:
(a) sometimes you refer to "my" (as in "my approach to...") and other times you slip into third person "Photo Tejas does this...". Should be consistent throughout.
(b) no where do you give your name. On your contact page, you don't give addresses or names. And, personally, I find it annoying to have to tap out the numbers by looking at the letters ( 823-foto ... better 823-FOTO (1234) ).
(c) On your banner, you have your logo and the "Portraiture, Glamour, and Fine Art" that are not now links.. you might wanna link the logo to your contacts page, and link the other three selections to a page that describes what you mean (and show examples of) the three types of photography you're going for. Sometimes, the defiition of these things can be a bit obscure, so having an example or examples can help solidify your customer's choice.
Otherwise, I like the simplicty of the site - no Flash or music... just your images which speak well for themselves.
Hope that was gentle enough.