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First Time Pin-Up Work - Multiple Images
Old 07-13-2006, 12:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A model I worked with a couple of months ago e-mailed me at the beginning of the week and asked if I was up for trying some pin-up images. I haven't really done any of these or studied them before, but she and I gave it a try last night along with one of her friends. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.





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Re: First Time Pin-Up Work - Multiple Images
Old 07-13-2006, 12:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice stuff......

I like the blue body suit and the red undies ones.
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Re: First Time Pin-Up Work - Multiple Images
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I think the blue bodysuit one looks the most pin-upish. That one's really cute!!

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Re: First Time Pin-Up Work - Multiple Images
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I agree the blue and red ones are the best....hey if you do posters...send me ones...I'll hang them in my garage.....
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Are you up for it?

In three of the images it seems that you had a little trouble in Photoshop cutting them out of the background. In your lead image the model is missing the fingers from her left hand. The third image looks as though you had trouble cutting out the bra. and in the last image something is wrong with the fingers on her left hand. Floating finger?

All the images look to be overexposed with hot spots all over the place.

That's it for the technical side. On the aesthetic side you wonderful job with the models and the pin-up style.

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Old 07-13-2006, 09:05 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Are you up for it?

In three of the images it seems that you had a little trouble in Photoshop cutting them out of the background. In your lead image the model is missing the fingers from her left hand. The third image looks as though you had trouble cutting out the bra. and in the last image something is wrong with the fingers on her left hand. Floating finger?

All the images look to be overexposed with hot spots all over the place.

That's it for the technical side. On the aesthetic side you wonderful job with the models and the pin-up style.

Rick D.
Wow! An actual critique of substance. And with some postive reinforcement thrown in to mitigate the critical remarks!
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Re: First Time Pin-Up Work - Multiple Images
Old 07-14-2006, 06:29 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Nice stuff......

I like the blue body suit and the red undies ones.
Thanks Ron,

Angel definitely has more of the body type and expressions as far as the pin-ups I have been looking at since yesterday.

I appreciate the comments.
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I think the blue bodysuit one looks the most pin-upish. That one's really cute!!

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Thanks for the comment Lisa,

I thought the blue looked really cute as well. It is one of my favorites from the shoot.
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I agree the blue and red ones are the best....hey if you do posters...send me ones...I'll hang them in my garage.....
Thanks Woodster,

If I get to the point that I think I shoot anything good enough for a poster I will let you know
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Are you up for it?

In three of the images it seems that you had a little trouble in Photoshop cutting them out of the background. In your lead image the model is missing the fingers from her left hand. The third image looks as though you had trouble cutting out the bra. and in the last image something is wrong with the fingers on her left hand. Floating finger?

All the images look to be overexposed with hot spots all over the place.

That's it for the technical side. On the aesthetic side you wonderful job with the models and the pin-up style.

Rick D.
Hello Rick,

Always up for a critique. That is the reason I post, to get feedback from those with more knowledge.

You are definitely right about the first image. She has her hand on a blue lid and I did have some extraction woes. I am not sure what happened on the third and last images though since I didn't do any extraction. Those are just straight white background. I will have to see if I can figure out what happened there.

The images are very contrasty. I pulled the levels in sharply from both ends and upped the saturation a bit in order to go for an image that was somewhere between a photo and an illustration. This monitor must be a bit too dark. I will have to run a calibration on it and retry the editing.
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