Hey Dwayne, good to see you posting again. Hope all is well with you and the family.
The second shot is lovely. The first shot is great compositionally, but I think it's too yellow. Perhaps you were trying to intentionally warm up the shot, but she looks a little jaundiced to me. Setting any camera and photographer issues aside, I think she could have benefited from the application of make-up to even out her skin tones. There's a lot of tone variation going on in her face that makes her skin look a little blotchy, and a basic application of cover-up and foundation would take care of that. But that's outside your area of responsibility.