Since you have 4 shots in your portfolio I am assuming you want us to critique those by directly commenting there? Some of us still don't understand this new method of critiquing directly to images posted in folios here. When anyone asks for a critique in the main forum, the old way was to look at what was posted and then remark in the thread. Make sure next time you invite them to your portfolio and make comments there if this is your method of reason. Otherwise, post a picture at a time to the main forum and then ask for critiques. Which may have an immediate reaction based on the old method that everyone is familiar with.