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Old 03-23-2006, 07:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I was going for "dark and moody". Keep in mind, this is my first studio shoot and I'm still trying to figure out light control...been a long time since college classes.
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Old 03-23-2006, 10:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Man, I think you are real close David...I like the mood you were going for, but I think it needs just a bit of pop...and I think you can make it pop with slight curves adjustments.
Hope you don't mind, but I took the liberty of playing with it to try and keep the mood, but make the image pop just a bit. I think the eyes being so dark is my major concern.
Take a look at the slight adjustment I made and see if this works
http://www.theintimatelook.com/galle...serialNumber=1
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Old 03-23-2006, 10:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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David,

I think part of your image is slightly underexposed. It's almost muddy. I understand the dark and moody part of it but to me it's just slightly under to really get it. I do like the fact that I can see DETAIL in the shadows.

The dude has lights......look out now!

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Old 03-23-2006, 10:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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As someone else said, it's very close, maybe even very, very close. I love the crop, just add a bit more contrast and I think you'll have it. I think the 'muddy' problem is a computer thing rather than a lighting problem. I suspect your lighting is 'right on'.
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Old 03-23-2006, 11:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I see what you are talking about, I'll have to play with it some. Thanks for the input, it's always appreciated!
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Old 03-23-2006, 11:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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That's what I was wondering actually, it seemed a little under exposed to the right. I did shoot these in RAW, so I can probably fix that, but I'd like to be able to get it in camera.
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That's my question. Is it the 10D I use? Is it the way photoshop sees the RAW file when I open it? So many variables!
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