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Old 01-31-2006, 10:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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In keeping with the weekly shoot. Here are a couple from the last session. Comments / suggestions always appreciated.



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Hi Dean,

Here are my comments/suggestions. But remember, I am a newbie still trying to figure out what I'm doing [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] So, take it for what it's worth!

Ok, in the first image I find the blinds more distracting than anything. Her expression is a little... blank or flat? Otherwise I like the crop.

Second Image. It could be my monitor but it looks like there is a green tint to her hair. Better facial expression. Again, like the crop.

Both images seem exposed well but flat lit. She is a very pretty girl with Gorgeous eyes! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img] Looking forward to next week! Thanks for sharing!

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Thanks Rick, still mostly a newbie here as well. The blinds were just kinda to do something new. Seen other images like it and was kinda suprised how hard it was to light ( that or I just dont know what the heck I'm doing) Still learning the post production stuff, for some reason, the image in PS doesnt look the same when its uploaded here. Maybe I need to do something prior to uploading. Thanks for the comments.

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The second shot isn't bad but the first one has some problems (to me).
I think the main thing is that it doesn't flatter the model at all. When you have skin that gathers like her neck it gives the appearance of the model having too much weight instead of the usual desire to make the model look slim. The strap looks uncomfortable to me also.
She has very pretty eyes and I wonder if you did a little different lighting with more contrast that would highlight the eyes and slim the face it could be really special.
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