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Old 12-20-2005, 06:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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im pleased with the way these came out even though i see plenty of flaws! These are just four of the hundreds we took. The shirt designer is a guy out in Florida who got ahold of me on Myspace then just mailed me the shirts. He wanted sex appeal for his website.

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Old 12-20-2005, 06:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Definite improvement, Tim!

A couple of nits to pick, on my part:

The model is pale. Really pale. Possibly on purpose, but the pale skin, white seamless and white clothing doesn't work for me. Change up the background color, perhaps yellow or blue, anything but black or white unless you're going for more of a "goth" style.

Drop the strobe down closer to eye level of the model - you've got a diffuser on it, take advantage of that and have your main light "wrap" the model rather than beaming down at her.

Move the model farther away from the background, or crank the background lights to eliminate the shadows.

Again, just my thoughts on what I'd do, based on what I think you're going for...

Overall, what I've seen of yours this is definitely coming along well!

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Old 12-20-2005, 10:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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why so high with the box? you've lost catchlights by doing so and remember: the closer the light source, the softer the light.

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The position of the back leg in the first one makes her look deformed. Her knee is locked and it just really looks painful.

Love the t-shirts and the undies combo!

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