Ok, see if this makes any sense.
First of all I like the photo, in my mind it looks good but for one thing.
Theres a bit of backlight showing thru between her left arm and the curve of her side. Not sure that is really what you wanted.
Second, I do like the red gel but I think repositioning Deann so she is more centered with it. Her right side doesn't appear to be seperated much if any.
Third, your allowed to disregard anything I say, because I'm new, so what the heck do I know.
Fourth, Oh wait there is no fourth, maybe a fifth but I'll save that for when we meet.
Merry Christmas ya'll [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]