Boy, I think the photographer missed a lot of opportunities to make great shots with a great model. First, in the costume, the lighting is not good, The highlights are few and subtle, but that costume demands some excitement. There should be lighting from the left and right. The backgtound is way too cluttered with ugly lines, shadows, and junk. The rear end of the car is uninteresting compared to the model. It would be so much better with just a jet black background and a properly lit model, but in that case, the headdress would also need to be lit up.
In the second one, again I Like the model; and both the lighting and the background are textbook disasters.
The third one is by far the best. I think the shoulder should come back, and that there are a lot better poses. The highlights are better, but not that good. I like the position of the feft shoe. The shoe on the right foot would look better on the dash. With the right lighting and pose, I think this one would look good.