Dean! the first one is a beautiful portrait, which I think would also look good in a black and white conversion, The second one how amazing it is to make someone look as young as you've done here..she looks 14yrs old in that image!
Now the third one, gives me the feeling like shes in a scary movie peeking out of a doorway just cracked a bit, it has a bit of an eery feel to it...not sure if thats where you were going in that image, so if not that could be considered a harsh critique..but thats the feeling I get from the third image!
and its really too bad 297 people viewed these and didnt comment, I dont know whats going on with people on GG lately, just seems maybe they are afraid of helping?? just my opinion!