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How do you like this one?
Old 11-10-2005, 02:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: How do you like this one?
Old 11-10-2005, 03:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Honestly, It doesn't do anything for me personally. All the reasons though are based on the photography, not your modeling. The tones and lighting seem flat, and the setting doesn't say much.
I don't think it's the best photo of you.

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Old 11-10-2005, 03:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Artistically it doesn't do anything to highlight the fact that you are a beautiful woman. David is right that the lighting is flat. Try a little trick. The viewer's eye in an image like this should normally be drawn to the point of interest (please note I said normally). If you squint and look at the image what grabs you visually? To me it is the big dark area in the rocks behind your beautiful posterior. To me, and this is just opinion, nothing should compete with your beautiful face and your wonderful body, but hey that;s just me.

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Re: How do you like this one?
Old 11-10-2005, 05:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well said sir! Added a little more than I culd think of on the fly!
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Old 11-10-2005, 07:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I think I see a crack in one of those rocks [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 11-10-2005, 07:43 PM   #6 (permalink)
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you're very beautiful and it's hard to get past that but the image is very flat (contrast-wise). it could easily be fixed with the burn tool. i'd show you but some people get all weird when someone messes with someone elses image and probly rightfully so.

i also think your pose could have been improved had you placed your right hand on the rock to your right and maybe gotten one foot up and visible.... probly your right foot by putting it on that rock to the right of your right foot.

if you're ever in L.A., would love to try my hand at adding to your portfolio.
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Classic cheesecake
Old 11-10-2005, 08:20 PM   #7 (permalink)
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very nice.
best wishes, gus
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Old 11-10-2005, 09:20 PM   #8 (permalink)
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They all said it, but I'll add another, "you look great".
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Old 11-11-2005, 02:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I agree to what some others said. It is flat and the dark area behind your behind is distracting. You should have crouched down so your lovely behind covered up the dark area of the rocks.
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I\'ll add my 2 cents, for whatever 2 cents is worth today...
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The other comments about the image needing some contrast punch-up are right on. One thing they didn't mention is that alternate croppings can also significantly help increase the visual impact.

I think there is just a little too much space around you with nothing but rocks.
Take a piece of paper and cut out some "L" shapes big enough to enclose the image and then start playing with the cropping. I think you can take some off your lower leg and get rid of a lot of rock and give the image a lot more impact.

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