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Old 11-05-2005, 05:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thanks, Skip Fenn

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Old 11-05-2005, 05:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow. Those legs look like they go allllllllll the way up and make a perfect...er, I mean, nice shot! She's very cute. The only thing that bothers me is the hot spot on the door. It draws my attention away from her and make the image a bit "busy" with the wreath in it.

Thanks for sharing! Do you have any more of her?

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Old 11-05-2005, 06:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Here's one with a little different flair.

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Old 11-05-2005, 06:20 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Mike here is another.

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Mike is more to your liking?

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Old 11-05-2005, 07:38 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The girl is great! The photo in front of the water is far better than the first. I'd push the water shot as you've got a winner there.


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Old 11-06-2005, 01:59 AM   #7 (permalink)
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The pose is cute, im no photographer so i wont comment on your technical errors, but why are her hands and feet bluish purplish? Was it cold?? Just really noticable in the first image, the other ones are nice. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Hailey

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Fixed lens camera?

It seems to me all the shots are from about the same distance. And all leave lots of space around the model. She is very attractive, I'd sure try to fill as much of the frame as possible with her rather than background.

The lake shot is interesting simply as you have apparently converted everything but her into B&W. It works, but using a lens to throw the background out of focus would simplify things a lot.

But that's just my opinion...

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Old 11-06-2005, 08:51 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Al,

Thanks for your comments. Very good by the way. With her legs I did stay back off of her quite a bit. But it wasn't a fixed lens. :-) The blurry background well I usually try to accomplish this. I screwed up on this one so I just tried to do something different by going B/W background. You know cover my mistakes. :-)
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Old 11-06-2005, 04:35 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Wow! Got any more pictures with those legs?
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