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Old 09-20-2005, 09:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm hoping this gets a better reception than my last two which went without comment...

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If your other two are on par with this one, I don't know why they went uncommented on. I love the clean skin on the model, nice catchlight, and overall image quality. I don't care for her expression, which seems almost like a blank stare to me. Even a slight tilt to the head with a corresponding change in the eye line would break up the straight on look which is something I personally don't care for.
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A nice attempt Scott but leave more room. This one is cropped too tightly. Allow her head to show with some room around it and include a bit of her shoulders. It's not only about the head. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
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I agree with Marc... The crop isnt working here. The expression seems a little blank to me and it appears that her eyes are looking up slightly. Cropping the top of the head can work in some images and I do that all the time but in this case I think you need to see more on the bottom of the image as well. Someone once said here,,"If you are gonna crop then crop like you mean it" I think that is pretty good advice.

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Thanks for the comments. She's not really a model, but the wife of another photographer who volunteered to sit for us. I'll work on the posing and crop next time. Hopefully I'll be able to shoot her more often and with some better wardrobe. Her skin is very nice. I did very minimal patching to remove a few blemishes, but the rest is all her. No blur at all here.
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Thanks Marc. I'll work on some better wardrobe, crops, and backgrounds.
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Thanks Scott. Love the hat and eyes in your shot!
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