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Old 09-08-2005, 06:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 09-08-2005, 07:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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mmmm Thoughts....wishing I could come to Cali...and you could teach me something about photography!!!



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David, you know I love ya' (not that way) but there a few technical nit picks that keep it from becoming an A+ photo instead of the B+ images that it is.

1. White AAAA tag.

2. White lining on her right pant leg.

3. Blown out arm--nah--the whole arm in the pic.

#3 nit pick is a personal thing but #1 & 2 are devilish details.

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Old 09-08-2005, 10:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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"white lightning"...ha ha...never heard that before (I think it's the inside lining on the shorts) Those (that and the tag) are easily fixed though...so I'll process that out.

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Old 09-08-2005, 10:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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What's to teach? You do great work! I just work with the available light and flash or reflector...you manipulate light to make it what you want. Someday, when I have a full studio, I'll need you to teach me.
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Rick, I disagree with your point number 1. The white tag is not an AAAA it's actually 2 stylized W's the logo for Wicked Weasel Bikini's. I would leave it in since it's only a slighty different interpretation of the image you posted with the Victoria's Secret panties.

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Old 09-09-2005, 11:15 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Well, I have to admit, I took the advice, and it seems to be a much stronger image.

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Ok, I took your advice and the image does look much better. What do you think? Did I do it well enough?

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Joshua:

I'm sticking to my guns here brother. A tag is a tag is a tag. If the 2 W's (thank you for pointing this out) were embossed onto the shorts in white lettering like the Victoria Secrets underwear it would be one thing, but it's a white tag and to me, is distracting from the overall image.

Feel free to disagree with me anytime.

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David:

Awesome!!! "A"

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