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What a day!
Old 09-03-2005, 08:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Had another shoot with autumn today... It was a great day. here are a couple of the ones ones I edited.
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Old 09-03-2005, 09:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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my problem with your pictures it there are not enough for me to make a qualified critique.

Post more and I might say something.

I am patiently awaiting...

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Old 09-03-2005, 11:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hmmm.... nice outfit! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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Not bad at all, very sexy suit.

On the second shot, I would have the model move the hand (closest to Camera) back to the edge of her behind, that would have made the amount of skin (or the thickness across that area) appear smaller..

something like this:



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Old 09-04-2005, 07:14 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey stu.... why don't you just come out and say it??? "lets see the boobs!!!"

hehe

sorry,,, just kidding...

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pretty nice, few comments
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pretty girl, awesome body. here are a few suggestions:

1. Light the back evenly. Do some metering to make the back even from side to side. It probably would have looked more awesome if the gradation was equal. I like it when the light comes from below and up, fading to dark above the head, or when the entire background is evenly lit. But a difference from one side to the other is distracting. I am using 2 small umbrellas or 2 softboxes at 45 degrees and 3/4 stop hotter than the main to make my back area even.

2. perhaps you can try to put a little distance between the model and backdrop and move the hair light further back so it is behind her more. Sometimes the hair light from the side isnt as effective as from the rear. I am also opening up the aperture more lately on digital to reduce the depth of field and get the film feel back. I am doing more at f/5.6 than I used to. The 1.5X image size digital chip thing makes it harder to get less DOF.

3. Watch the teeth on a model. If her teeth aren't perfect, I ask them to smile with their eyes and keep the mouth closed more. Just my personal preference.

4. Post process the armpit vaginas out. All girls got em, but if you clean that area up in PS, its looks neater.

On number 1, see if you have another image where she is in the same body position but looking right at camera. I bet this would be a killer.

Nice stuff, sorry if my comments are not well received, but I like your work.

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Re: pretty nice, few comments
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Thank you. That critique is the kind we need more of around here. It was VERY well received and appreciated. Thanks again.

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Wow...
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Great job Scott.. you made me think to move back. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] Will you spare some spot?
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I was just wondering the other day what you have been up to... Nice to see you around again.

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Well.. I'm starting again Scott. Especially after seing your stuff lately. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
Life's been so busy here for me. New "significant other", 8-5 job and just bought a house pretty much kept me away from shooting.
At last for the this past week I contact some models and MUA and trying to schedule some photo shoot so we'll see if still have some skill. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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