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DeAnn and Friend#1(N)
Old 09-01-2005, 10:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Comments and critiques welcome!

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Old 09-01-2005, 11:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think the pose is off.
DeAnn looking away instead of at the other model.
No tension...
IMHO.
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i agree
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it's like i am looking at the poses and the foto, and wondering: what is happening here?? great body on model sitting up. lighting is a bit harsh and would show them off a bit better if it were softer perhaps. what was the idea in this foto/scene? looks like a pause in a CPR class actually... LoL
 
 
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Old 09-02-2005, 05:43 AM   #4 (permalink)
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looks like a pause in a CPR class actually... LoL

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now thats funny!!!!! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

I kept looking at it thinking there should be a dark male nude figure in the background....just very subtly lit almost fading into the background...

any volunteers?
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Old 09-02-2005, 06:07 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the composition, looks like they were in the dark and someone shined a light on them (caught them in an intimate moment).

My only nit pick is Deanna’s right shoulder has a rather large hot spot.

I like the look and concept.

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Re: male nude???
Old 09-02-2005, 08:04 AM   #6 (permalink)
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GOOD LUCK!! i have always sought male nudes, but they just dont appear or if they are interested, never follow up!

i DO have (by the grace of God) a poss shoot within a few more days with a male whose sister i'm shooting next tuesday, and hope he is still interested.... and serious about posing...
 
 
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Pretty nice exposure and lighting work - but I think you're right, it lacks a tension. You've got both models aligned on thirds, but both are more or less interacting with only that chunk of emptiness. I like your idea of the shadowy figure.
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Really like the way the shadow follows the model on the floor. It seems to follow evvery contour of her body. I had to laugh a bit thinking that you still had the temp. set at 60 or below.
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Beautiful work, Don!! Your work is getting better all the time. I wish I had a live-in model. All I have is four frickin' cats that tear everything up.

Anyway, thanks for sharing! The ladies look delicious! Have a great weekend and I'll talk to you later.

Mike

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Love it [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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