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It\'s been awhile
Old 08-27-2005, 09:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I hope I've improved. Some shots from three weeks ago. I just started to post process. Not completly done yet, still playing with them, but this is just some I worked on. Need to work on my cropping.










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Old 08-27-2005, 11:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The best news for you is, you've correctly identified the one glaring weakness in all of these; the cropping. All of them are pretty well lit, obviously feature an attractive model, and the posing is fine. But the crops...
#1 The fabric around her waist and thighs is just visual noise as a silhouette. If you crop to a line across her waist, right above the fabric, and vertically just before the back of her head, the upper left 1/4 of this one is a great shot...
#2 Elbows? There or not there!
#3 No really, what do you have against her elbows??
#4 Now the knees!
That said, everything else about the shots is passable, and in the case of #1, excellent...
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I liked too much the first photo ... great sillhuette ... I liked the tilted composition. About the other photos I don't like the flat light and the "by the book" poses, I think you should have try new approuchs as you did in the first photo.
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Old 08-27-2005, 02:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments. As for the knees. I cropped a bit off because her left toes where missing and I guess I thought it would even it out. I'll place her knees back, but the toes of her shoe are just not in the photo. My bad. As far as elbows go. Yuck to elbows. Just kidding. I'll work on it a bit more. Thanks again.
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