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Old 08-27-2005, 01:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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from yesterday. Comments and critiques are welcome.

 
 
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Old 08-27-2005, 02:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Its an interesting perspective. There seems to be an odd splash of light extending from her chin to shoulder on the right. It is sort of distracting.



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Old 08-27-2005, 01:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
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As you said it`s a simple shoot but i like the composition.

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I liked the pose of the model, the production and location ... but I don't like that sepia tonning with low contrast ... I would prefer in a darker way.
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Old 08-27-2005, 11:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey Joey, I like the sepia, but her hand sort of bothers me, is she showing off her ring or swatting a fly?



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Thanks for the comments and critiques.

The shadow on model's right shoulder did bother me at first but grew on me. I decided to PS it out just to see the overall effect. I have to admit that it looks a little better.

The sepia tone was just an experiment. I was really going for b&w which comes across better.

And for Steven, she wasn't swatting off flies. She was just showing her beautiful ring. I will be pitching this as a print ad spec for a jewelry collection.

Here is my layout.

 
 
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