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Ok, I went out on a limb....
Old 08-22-2005, 12:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I decided to push myself and "dare to suck" (who said that?)

Anyway, the idea here was to portray the mood of dusk "waiting for the train". The yellow lights in the station waiting area, dusky sky, etc.

So, how'd I do? Seriously, if it sucks, tell me, I'm trying to grow.

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Re: Ok, I went out on a limb....
Old 08-22-2005, 12:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks a little soft in the face ...but other than that.....I love it..
great concept...



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Old 08-22-2005, 12:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the picture and the mood but I'm not wild about the way the yellow reflected her skin and face. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
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Re: Ok, I went out on a limb....
Old 08-22-2005, 12:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I shot it hand held @ 800iso, so, that's probably true. I didn't want a flash to ruin it, and I wanted to try it without a tripod for mobility.

So, maybe that's a lesson for me.
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We don\'t need no stinking tripods
Old 08-22-2005, 12:24 PM   #5 (permalink)
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and I wanted to try it without a tripod for mobility.



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You're your own tripod... you got two legs and a, uhhh... okay, you're a bi-pod and you're free!
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Old 08-22-2005, 01:00 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Only you know it's a train station. she looks like she's standing on the edge of the frame and even if you could see it's a train station there is nothing to say that's she's waiting for a train. Unfortunately a little soft. It is a good starting point.
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Re: Ok, I went out on a limb....
Old 08-22-2005, 01:19 PM   #7 (permalink)
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This is a stretch, but maybe gelling a strobe to match the available station lights?
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Old 08-22-2005, 02:50 PM   #8 (permalink)
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The fact that you told us it is a train station is the only way I can tell that it is... So the story in the image doesnt match the story you told about it. The yellow is overpowering the image to me. I agree that it is soft as well. I cant believe no one said anything about you chopping off her finger as well. I think it is a nice start to a very nice shot and I commend you for posting it, but I have to say that ,for me, the negatives far out weigh the positives.

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Nice legs!
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Old 08-22-2005, 04:13 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I cant believe no one said anything about you chopping off her finger as well.

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You mean the very edge of her pinky? Damn, sorry bout that [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]

Actually, the original has it, I just cropped it tight because I like them that way, I guess I went a little too tight. As far as the other comments, that seems to be the prevailing theme to the responses, so, so lloks like I need to practice this more.

Thanks for the thoughts!
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