Ok, I went out on a limb....

[DavidMoyle]

I'll tell her you said so [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

[DavidMoyle]

that would work for the color, but I wanted to keep the natural shadows created by the lights already there.

[DavidMoyle]

Ok, well, one more for "kinda sucks"

Thanks for the honest feedback!

[DavidMoyle]

That seems to be the common dislike. Thank you for the honest reply!

[DavidMoyle]

No comment!

I actually did sit down and rest my arms on my knees for a few of the shots, so I'll have to see if that helped.

[Antwan]

If this image is to portray her waiting for a train, why is she facing the pillar and looking at the cam? The shot should have been of her looking over your shoulder and you have some tracks in the pic or have her looking at her watch (which she doesn't have) with tracks in the image. Also, I think the blue in sky doesn't give the mood of dusk; I don't see transition of colour that a dusk sky has. I think you took the pic at too low of an angle and showed too much blue.

Just my 2 cents worth.

[DavidMoyle]

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Just my 2 cents worth.

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Actually, it was more like a buck fifty [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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think the blue in sky doesn't give the mood of dusk; I don't see transition of colour that a dusk sky has.

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Well, I'll talk to God about his choice of colors last night

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If this image is to portray her waiting for a train, why is she facing the pillar and looking at the cam? The shot should have been of her looking over your shoulder and you have some tracks in the pic or have her looking at her watch (which she doesn't have) with tracks in the image.

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I see your point here, I guess I was too specific with my "story" in my original post. The unfortunate thing here is that the waiting areas are 20-plus feet from the tracks that are sunk down like 5 feet below the loading area, so it was hard to have the lighting AND be next to the tracks. The rest are good ideas I'll keep in mind.

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I think you took the pic at too low of an angle and showed too much blue.

[/ QUOTE ] I like the angle personally, and the blues were just there thanks to God and California sky.

Thanks for your reply!