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I spent about 2 hours on this image. HELP!
Old 02-12-2005, 09:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
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something is just... off... i suck at making the BG look decent i know that much. click on the bottom photo for the orig file... (2.18 mb straight off the camera)

critique and feedback is much appreciated.

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click here for original (2.18mb) copyright Tim Carson
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Re: I spent about 2 hours on this image. HELP!
Old 02-12-2005, 11:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I guess I don't really think it sucks. What are you going for? I'm happy to help if I can.

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Re: I spent about 2 hours on this image. HELP!
Old 02-12-2005, 11:53 AM   #3 (permalink)
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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Hi Tim,
Your lighting, seems to me, rather cold.
Your Model is hunched over into an abnormal looking position.
The shadows on her face by her cheeck,lips and chin.
The models facial expression.
Slight bags under her eyes.
Her neck is missing.
Her left hand's pinky is missing.
Her feet lack detail. Maybe should have placed them on the footpegs.
All in all, some very distracting things to make the viewers eyes uncomfortable when viewing your photo
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I would say, had you knelt or squatted for the shot, and also moved to your left some and squatted or stayed same height but moved back a few feet and to your right, being centered in the middle of the bike.it could have helped overall image alot. Would have given the viewers a different and/or unique perspective to view the model and bike from.

Try to shoot every angle possible. you may have 20, 30, 50 junk shots but hopefully when shooting every conceivable angle you nail that one super shot that people can't live without.

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Does this help?



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uhhh....Yeah!!
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Re: I spent about 2 hours on this image. HELP!
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If you were going through all that trouble, you might as well fix the bags under the eyes and smooth out the hands.

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what camera are you using? image was pretty noisy... a bunch of hot/dead pixels on your sensor too...



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EXIF info on image says ...

Make - OLYMPUS E-10
ExposureTime - 1/60 seconds
FNumber - 2.00
ExposureProgram - Shutter priority
ISOSpeedRatings - 80
MeteringMode - Multi-segment
ColorSpace - sRGB

... I noticed noise and odd pixels as well
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her\'s my take on it
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or if you dont like the green...


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If you're going to remove the bags under her eyes, you might as well tame the hump back. (liquify tool) [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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