[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Hi Tim,
Your lighting, seems to me, rather cold.
Your Model is hunched over into an abnormal looking position.
The shadows on her face by her cheeck,lips and chin.
The models facial expression.
Slight bags under her eyes.
Her neck is missing.
Her left hand's pinky is missing.
Her feet lack detail. Maybe should have placed them on the footpegs.
All in all, some very distracting things to make the viewers eyes uncomfortable when viewing your photo
I would say, had you knelt or squatted for the shot, and also moved to your left some and squatted or stayed same height but moved back a few feet and to your right, being centered in the middle of the bike.it could have helped overall image alot. Would have given the viewers a different and/or unique perspective to view the model and bike from.
Try to shoot every angle possible. you may have 20, 30, 50 junk shots but hopefully when shooting every conceivable angle you nail that one super shot that people can't live without.