It's a critique. It's related to the photograph only. The makeup and lighting are poor. He needs to use a better makeup artist (if a makeup artist was used at all) and he needs to learn better lighting technique. Rolando's "Tips" section has a lot of helpful information that he can use.
I could just blow smoke and tell him it's wonderful, but it sounds like he is interested in a real critique.
I'm sure everyone has the ability to view your portfolio and my portfolio and decide on whether my advice is valid.
You, however, have directly insulted me personally. However, it isn't relevant in any way.