I'd have to say it kinda breaks it. Even though she is off to the one third, by having the model looking at the rocks in the middle, it stops my eye from ever looking into the right side of the picture. This may be good to add some graphics, but what if you're not lookng to add them??? If this picture was to stand alone as it is, I don't think it works so well. However, if this were shot vertically with the right side cropped out, then it works very well.
