The first three shots the lighting elements are fine. You just need to pay attention to some other details.....
1. Hair distracting and there seems to be no compositional value. Model seems to be sleeping which is fine but there are a few problems with the body lay out that is distracting as well.
2. Nice light feel to it. Model is straining her look with her forehead wrinkled....I like the shot, but pay attention to the model's expression.
3. Beautiful but compose it with the angle of the model.
4. Amputee syndrome and if you landscape crop give it more negative space.
5. What were you thinking? Throw it away.
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