Obviously I know this model well. What I don't like is the expression, she looks mad. Second, is the "canoeing" in the eyes, the irises are floating in a white canoe. While this is ok when models have larger, photogenic eyes, it's borderline in this image of Holley because the top of the irises is clipped a bit. THe irises also too centered for me.
Moving on, she looks like she's missing her right shoulder (camera left), that bugs me a bit too. While shoulders should be tilted and not squared, in this type of straight-on image I'd like to see both shoulders. That's my two cents worth.
Now here's mine for critique, I have my bullet proof vest on, so chip away, thanks, rg sends!
(This is Sheila, she'll be modeling at this month's,
Glamour, Beauty & the Nude workshop in Houston, room still available. )
Re: The running critique thread ....