First, great shot...
Second I am not a Post-Process expert...
But FWIW, I think the shot is processed well, maybe it looks a bit soft - but that may be just the process you used on her skin. Sometimes overdone... but not in this case... you took it to the edge but not over - my opinion.
The first thing that sticks out to me is the hot spot on her right elbow... but I bet that was there from in camera and a pain to deal with. EDIT = now i see the same thing on the side of her body (her right our left).
Overall great job... I can see lots of ad copy along the left hand side of the page... makes for a great shot for an ad...
my .02
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