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Old 01-31-2008, 08:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Good work, Bobby.
It's just my opinion, but I think the second needed a bit of fill on the shadow side, as his broad and open smile makes this a bit more of a casual shot. OTOH, the deep shadows work well in the third shot (IMO). However, there, the model "hunches" up a bit and the suitcoat pulls up in the back. Not too badly, though. My favorites are the first and third. Good model.
Thanks for sharing.
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