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Re: C & C please
Old 01-24-2008, 06:26 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Good composition and from what I can tell, sharpness is also good. I think the lighting and cropping could be improved on two of them, however.

#1 -- try not to cut off the fingers
#2 -- I'd suggest turning her hand to show less surface (shrinking the hand) and more light on the coat. You've got the detail in the coat, so you can do that in post.
#3 -- I like this one the best

Great model..love the eyes and hair.
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