I think they most all have some problems. There are so many, that it is hard to say very much about them as I found myself getting lost trying to scroll back and forth and know which photo I was talking about. I think the copyright notice is overkill and distracting. It doesn't add to the photos, it distracts from the photos. The lighting generally works pretty well and you have some interesting ideas, but in most cases little details got in the way. Here is an annotated screen shot of your photos to give little notes on each. But you might want to just post process one and post it (your favorite) and then we can give more details. #1 and #6 have the most potential.
Cheers,
rfs