Please don't take this wrong, but if this were MY daughter's senior pictures, you wouldn't be getting a dime... no makeup... no hair brush... she looks like she just walked in from a trip to the grocery store. And before anyone says "hey, critique the images and not the model"... I am. All of the above is under the control of the photog who's deciding whether to press the button or not.
As far as the images go... the exposures are fine, though having the subject centered in each of the pictures ignores the more active framing that can be achieved with the subject a bit on the left or right of center (think 'rule of thirds'). 2nd image cropping is a bit weird with the hand missing... 3rd image could would look better by bringing her left hand onto her hip and letting her twist her torso the same way.
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