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Re: Traditional shot of lovely Kellie
Old 10-21-2007, 08:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The image isn't sharp. There doesn't seem to be a focal point. Too much dead space above her head as well. Not a good composition.

Why is she wearing a fur hooded jacket with a sleeve-less summer sweater?

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