I think it looks fine. You did a good job on lighting... it looks like you paid attention.
You don't ever need to fear posting images here. Nobody is really " Out to get," other people. When you push forward - we're with ya. If we see mistakes which have taken a while to correct for ourselves... we might point those things out ( and razz ya a little ). We might prod and push - but we're hoping you get better. So don't fear it... enjoy the experience. This board has seen some amazing shooters mature from where you are to the moon.
It all starts when you look at the shot you posted and think hard at what you could have done better.
Good luck in your journey.
christian