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Originally Posted by BobEdens
This is from a shoot the other night, trying to capture "music".
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Here's my first critique on G1...
What I like:
I like the subject - he adds a gritty quality that opposes the instrument. Your lighting is dark -- but clearly you were going for that. Your shadows have good detail.
What I would change:
The composition is cluttered. The motion detector behind the keys and the music stands on the right edge could be eliminated to clean up the image. I like the purple wrap and would keep it. If this is a cover shot or announcement, I'd keep it as composed, but unless you need room for a title or other text across the top, the image seems low to me and I'd crop it to move the subject higher.
And here's my first photo offered up on G1...
