I like it except for a couple of things. The eyes are way too soft - the whole image is soft but that helps skin and hurts when trying to connect with the eyes, so be very picky about focus. Second is the little triangle of light on her left cheek - if she had turned her head to the left a little, I think it would have improved the shot and been less distracting. Lastly, the one area of hair blowing doesn't work for me. I think it's either all blowing or none blowing to improve and be less distracting.
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LSC
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