Hey Nyna,
From viewing the websites you listed I am assuming you are the model and Nyna. With this in mind my comments are based on my opinion and professionalism only. Your logo looks good from a design standpoint. I do like the potential of this pose but, have too may nits for this image to visually work for me.
Nits:
1. You are not separated from the background. Your body seems to blend into the
background which effectively looses your physical form you are trying to reveal.
2. The blue lighting which shows on your lower left breast, lower abdomen, chain
belt, and lower left thigh is very distracting and does not fit in with your theme.
3. The lighting which is purposefully directed on your physical form seems to be
too hot and hard to create the visual effect you may have desired to create.
4. Your application of the oil or glycerin/water mix seems to not be applied evenly
over your entire body. Some areas seem sweaty moist while others appear to
be normal skin.
5. Post process with something like airbrush gem to glam / soften your skin for a
smooth effect.
6. Lastly, the lower right buttock has a white streak from light reflection that is
overpowering and very distracting to the nice curve of your physic.
7. Watch for your skin to be washed out when photographed. Different skin tones
are affected differently and you do not want your skin to be lost.
Attributes
1. I love the lighting on and emotion in your eye. To me your left eye is powerful
and seductive all in one.
2. Your long hair is to die for and should be exploited not, lost in the back ground.
Use your hair as a focal point or enticement. Do not let this asset go to waste.
3. Your posed position shows you have the physic, stamina, and ability to use
your physical form to visually create a sense of “pardon” in viewers to draw
them into the image. Experiment with different poses and form directions which
add to your desired effect / direction.
Suggestions:
Explain your concept to the photographer or use a more professional photographer to achieve the quality and professional images you desire. If this is your concept then look at the nits and work with the photographer to improve the visual impact of your next photo shoot. If this is the photographer’s concept and set up then use a different photographer.
Other images you have on your websites appear to be more professionally photographed than this image you posted here. Try and use those photographers or if it is the same one ask to reshoot this image and correct the nits.
Site problems:
Foxesvision video on YouTube shows: “This video is no longer available”.
Take care and be safe.
God be with you,
Tony
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Take care and be safe.
God be with you,
Tony
 
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