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Re: 2nd Fashion Shoot
Old 07-07-2006, 05:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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As far as exposure and composition, it looks just fine. But for me, it seems to lack impact or "oomph".

I think that's partly due to the "busyness" of the photo. Pretty much everything is in focus and there's vertical and horizontal lines running all through it. Even her dress is "busy".
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