I think you lucked into something here. She's a doll, and has a nice style with her clothes and personality (it comes through in the pix) to boot. Three suggestions though: I'd like to see the eye-liner softened ("smudged") a bit all the way around (and I LOVE sultry, smokey eyes). I'd like to know that she can give you a less shiney (or matte) finish on the face itself. While it looks good here, in most situations it would look like she needed some powder. Last, I'd like to see you shoot her with her own eye color, not the fake blue contacts. If she had real blue or grey eyes, she's be hot, but she'll probably be just as hot with her own eyes. She's got great hair and a sexy smile. I would say she's way past a diamond in the rough, she's almost polished.
Regards,
Andy Pearlman
Andy Pearlman Studio