Mike,
In my opinion the hair "look" is a strong point of your image and the hands, of course, cover part of it. Also, I'm not a big fan of seeing hot spots on the face and there are several (forehead, cheek, upper lip, chin, nose bridge and nose tip). If it were my shoot, I would have the NUA do the powder thing. Lastly, the main light seems low to me and maybe that is the reason for JT's note on the breast shadow.
Lovely model, good focus and color.
Jim
