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Man you got THAT right...
Here are my observations...take em for what they are worth...not much...
#1 I like the lighting, just not real big on the pose. Those straight on shots very seldom do the subject justice and in this one makes her appear wider than I know she is. I also don't like the head position..
#2 Wrinkles in the neck...gotta watch for those. They are VERY noticeable in this image. Once again nice even lighting. Perhaps a shallower DOF to put more emphasis on the model.
#3 I think this is the angle best suited for these types of images, but I would like to see her right shoulder turned into the camera...leave her hips the way they are, just bring that shoulder arounf a bit. We lose the arm from just below the shoulder to the wrist and it looks odd.
She is a very pretty young lady and one to work with again and again if possible.