perhaps a little too much photoshop..my standard suggestion.
The model is cute, but you need to get her engaged more. The car pose is better, but in the water, she doesnt look like she is having a GREAT time.
The models eyes, smile, body language...all together, make a priceless glamour image as opposed to just a pic of a pretty girl.
Once again, not bad, but get her in the mood.
BTW, the difference between a model and a a pretty girl is pretty big.
A pretty girl you might want to hang out with or take to bed, but a model is one that everyone that looks at the picture thinks she wants to go bed with THEM. That special quality is very hard to find, but when you got a model that can project that feeling..its amazing.
One of the most beautiful models, and amazing ladies, that I know, Playboy Playmate Lindsey Vuolo, Miss November 2001. Her website is
www.lindseyvuolo.net