Okay Sheena, here's my opinions on the images. I'm just an amateur, so take my statements for what they're worth...
#1: I wish the horizon line was, well, horizontal. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] I would've liked to see you either to one side or the other in the frame, or tighter cropped.
#2: Looks a bit underexposed. I think the whites should be whiter. In this case I think I'd like to see more of the outfit, too.
#3: Again, not digging the framing here... Here I'd like to see the image zoomed out some, with your head placed more to the upper left in the frame, not in the center. This one looks a bit underexposed, too.
Anyways, that's just what I see. If your photographer's just starting out and he hasn't joined here, get him to, he'll learn a lot. Well like I said, I'm pretty much a noob photographer too, and I know I got a lot to learn too, but hopefully this will help some.
Sam
(The whites could probably be whiter in this one, too [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img])