The fact that you told us it is a train station is the only way I can tell that it is... So the story in the image doesnt match the story you told about it. The yellow is overpowering the image to me. I agree that it is soft as well. I cant believe no one said anything about you chopping off her finger as well. I think it is a nice start to a very nice shot and I commend you for posting it, but I have to say that ,for me, the negatives far out weigh the positives.
Scott
