Hi Marty
ok heres what I see and would change.
1. Loose the gels
2. Tighter jeans, they look a little too loose for this pose, especially at the cuffs.
3. Jacket at wrist is pulled up on the right hand and down on the other.
4. Stockings if more evenly pulled to approx same height.
5. Again, I think Don mentioned it, I would turn hips slightly.
I know these are all nit picks and may only be me. I like the idea. We are all learning including myself.
Thanks
Mike