Don,
You and DeAnn have way too much free time. I'm jealous.
Great shot. I love the mood. As someone already mentioned it is more realistic then your studio shots and I Like it. The only suggestions are:
1. The gown. Not just the mid section but along the hip and leg should have been spread out more evenly. It looks too lumpy. if it is too long you might consider folding it up on the inside to make it shorter.
2. DeAnn's right hand doesn't look natural to me and stands out more then I like.
I can relate to what you said about paying attention to all the details. I haven't got it yet either. I always find something I don't like in my shots. It's easy being an arm chair critique after the fact [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] . But practice only makes us better.
Keep them coming.
Luis
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