Paula the eyesight is obviously a bit wonky with some of our esteemed photographers is the prop you are holding from a batman movie (BOOMARANG) assie description(Maybe I saw the detail because living down under we see thigs upsidedown and the bat boomerang is being held upside down.
With every theme type of shot the devil is in the detail,to me you look a little cramped for space, even twisting the bat thing a little would clear the face area,the shot does have some goth overtones to it to me the camera angle is to high eye level would change the perspective of the shot considerable.
As I do not have any similar shots to show you I will post a neg scan 5x4 of a table lamp my title is the perfect model never answers back and all you have to do is turn her on! ( keep posting my work has improved just by looking and seeing the considerable talent on this forum)
regards
Barry Treleaven
www.southlandimages.net