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Re: Self Critique
Old 05-14-2005, 11:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Okay #1 lighting if flat..background appears pink..
#2 Colors dont mesh..but damn thats a sexy expression.
#3 Background appears Pinkish again..and the damn scarf is in the way!
#4 Background is MAGENTA! and the hat should be on the floor!
overall the concept didnt work...should have been darker in color creating a gloomier atmosphere... not sure gloomy works for cheesecake However its obvious these didnt work either!
"THE DEVIL IS THE DETAILS!!!"
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